Guys, it looks like I haven't done much, but a lot has been going on with my life, please send any suggestions on how to improve on this project, my mind is just too tired with everything this year. Here are two ideas on concept #3.
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I can read the 5 a lot better than before. but i still think you can find a better typeface. also, the small details like the edges of the paint circles are bothering me. they look like little hairs bushes or something. i think a more simplified paint drop would be more sufficient. unless you make those little hair things into a landscape of trees or something and zoom up on them. i think that would be very interesting. i dont think you even needs the half tone.
ReplyDeleteThe only suggestion I have in addition to Alan is close up the white space you have in the middle where the circle of the 5 is, my eye goes right there and this is having a negative impact on your design. Also What is with the "creAtive"...did I miss something? I'm not sure of the point or the relationship.
ReplyDeleteGood Luck
I just tried to use the A from the Adobe i guess
ReplyDeleteI agree about the negative space in the middle being distracting..try moving the 5 around a little more.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could move the circles a bit more, or add another one in the middle so the negative space doesn't seem that distracting? Hope you get better!
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