This is the first batch of comps, I think I'm going to stick with this kind of look, but I don't know if we are supposed to have the exact adobe logo, so I found a font that would look like the real thing. Anyways hope you guys like it. I'll take any suggestions.
I like the color verlappings with the halftone and whatnots. try using cmyk instead of primary colors. i dont think you should you should use that typeface, its hard to read, and the effects on the typeface are not even clean. the centered type might work, but i think you just need to play with hierarchy and space. make sure there's enough space so the type is readable. but the circles are a pretty good idea, just try other filters and whatnot so you can have different variations for the other softwares.
#3 has the most potential, but how about using a different font. this one feels too grunge. what would the contrast of something cleaner work with the roughness of what is behind it?
This is the first batch of comps, I think I'm going to stick with this kind of look, but I don't know if we are supposed to have the exact adobe logo, so I found a font that would look like the real thing. Anyways hope you guys like it. I'll take any suggestions.
ReplyDeleteI like the color verlappings with the halftone and whatnots. try using cmyk instead of primary colors. i dont think you should you should use that typeface, its hard to read, and the effects on the typeface are not even clean. the centered type might work, but i think you just need to play with hierarchy and space. make sure there's enough space so the type is readable. but the circles are a pretty good idea, just try other filters and whatnot so you can have different variations for the other softwares.
ReplyDelete#3 has the most potential, but how about using a different font. this one feels too grunge. what would the contrast of something cleaner work with the roughness of what is behind it?
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