hmm... play with the background more. the subtle gradient is making the cover look like a screen saver. i also think the screen saver line thing can have more thick and thins to it to give it dynamic-ity. also make sure the adobe logo is the whole logo and not chopped off. there is direction to the design layout, but i think you just needs movement and more color.
I agree with Alan's overall comment. I also think you can close up the gap between the words a little, the leading needs to be less. The kerning is good. I actually kinda liked what you were doing in the "Adobe comps 1" you might want to play up one of those. Good luck. Kim Jensen
Looks pretty professional, but I dont know how well the colors work. I like the swirl on the side looks nice. The line spacing for the title is a little much.
This is the best one so far I think - it looks the most professional. Maybe play with adding some more colors or shapes to make it more visually interesting?
Although you have that line-work on the side, the design looks pretty static. Your previous three designs are too busy because of the textured typeface you are using. Maybe if you toned that down, then it'll work better.
I feel the text is to heavy and I want to see more of that line design of whatever that is... maybe you can use a white background and the design is blue.., It seems like the background is too dominant right now... The other designs are a little with the textures and circles are a little to heavy maybe you simplify some textures or have less, have more sharper edges or not so crowed overlaping elements....
hmm... play with the background more. the subtle gradient is making the cover look like a screen saver. i also think the screen saver line thing can have more thick and thins to it to give it dynamic-ity. also make sure the adobe logo is the whole logo and not chopped off. there is direction to the design layout, but i think you just needs movement and more color.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alan's overall comment. I also think you can close up the gap between the words a little, the leading needs to be less. The kerning is good. I actually kinda liked what you were doing in the "Adobe comps 1" you might want to play up one of those.
ReplyDeleteGood luck.
Kim Jensen
Looks pretty professional, but I dont know how well the colors work. I like the swirl on the side looks nice. The line spacing for the title is a little much.
ReplyDeleteThis is the best one so far I think - it looks the most professional. Maybe play with adding some more colors or shapes to make it more visually interesting?
ReplyDeleteAlthough you have that line-work on the side, the design looks pretty static. Your previous three designs are too busy because of the textured typeface you are using. Maybe if you toned that down, then it'll work better.
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I feel the text is to heavy and I want to see more of that line design of whatever that is... maybe you can use a white background and the design is blue.., It seems like the background is too dominant right now...
ReplyDeleteThe other designs are a little with the textures and circles are a little to heavy maybe you simplify some textures or have less, have more sharper edges or not so crowed overlaping elements....
The color is a little too flat, maybe add a slight gradient. Make the text a little smaller to draw attention to the five, that might work out.
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